people, identities and profiles and their right-here, right-now mobile stuff:
</p><p>
People in phonebooks and on Facebook. Stuff like photos off the mobile camera and photos
-on Flickr; personal messages, public Twitter updates; meetup times and map locations.
-Identities, videos, reviews, comments, news, statuses, calendars and current map
-location.
+on Flickr. Personal messages, public Twitter updates. Videos, reviews, comments, news,
+meetup times, calendars and current map locations.
</p><p>
-Merged and tracked as they change, for all participants in the U-Web. The U-Web will
-magically shuffle and combine all this dynamic, interactive data around for you,
-according to the permissions you set.
+Merged and tracked as they change; the U-Web will magically shuffle and combine all this
+dynamic, interactive data around for you, according to the permissions you set.
</p><p>
A U-Web mobile application will merge these on- and off-device people, media, times
and places in a single, seamless interface - with one map and one calendar.
<p>
The U-Web has parallels (and considerable compatibility) with the Web:
</p><p>
-Like the Web, the U-Web has an open protocol and notation, meaning that all the above
-functionality can be implemented by many separate groups of developers - no-one will own
+Like the Web, the U-Web is based on open standards, meaning that all the above
+functionality can be implemented by many separate groups of developers. No-one will own
the U-Web - or have to do all the work themselves! It will allow anyone to join in and
-offer interactive content - an unlimited ecosystem of mashups. The protocol and notation
-are for peer-to-peer multicast data rather than the Web's client-server documents.
+offer interactive content - an unlimited ecosystem of mashups. Specifically, the U-Web
+has an open protocol and notation for peer-to-peer multicast data updates, rather than
+the Web's client-server document publishing.
</p><p>
-The U-Web application is like a browser, except it's a two-way interactive and dynamic
-data viewer meant for mashups and having both 2D and 3D as a native render. It will have
-a tactile, intuitive interface optimised for people, media, times and places. In the
-U-Web, you, as a user of this application, are a first class entity, visible to others.
-The application will have access to all your machine capabilities such as PIM data,
+The U-Web application is like a browser, except that, instead of a Web browser's essentially
+one-way static document viewing, it's a two-way interactive and dynamic data viewer
+meant for mashups and having both 2D and 3D as a native render. It will have a tactile,
+intuitive interface optimised for people, media, times and places, rather than for
+linear text. Unlike in the Web, in the U-Web, you, as a user of this application, are a
+first class dynamic entity, visible to others. Unlike a Web browser, the U-Web
+application will natively have access to all your machine capabilities such as PIM data,
Media, GPS coordinates, accelerometer, vibration, telephony and camera.
</p><p>
+See <a href="http://the-u-web.org/">the U-Web site</a> for more details about the U-Web.
+</p><p>
<hr />
</p>
-<h3>What Cilux may look like</h3>
+<h3>Mockup of what Cilux may look like</h3>
<p>
-Here's a mockup of what Cilux may look like. Of course, it will have Maemo, not Windows
-Mobile, status bars, etc.
-</p><p>
<img src="http://the-u-web.org/wireframe03.png" />
</p><p>
-<a href="https://garage.maemo.org/projects/cilux/">Cilux</a> is a U-Web "Exchange": a
-peer for the <a href="http://the-u-web.org/">U-Web</a> Mobile 2.0 platform. It is
-targeted at MIDs and smartphones with OpenGL ES 2.0, such as Maemo 5 and the Omnia HD.
<hr />
+</p>
+<h3>Cilux Technical Overview</h3>
+<p>
</p><p>
-See <a href="http://the-u-web.org/">the U-Web site</a> for more details about the U-Web.
+<a href="https://garage.maemo.org/projects/cilux/">Cilux</a> is a U-Web "Exchange": a
+peer for the <a href="http://the-u-web.org/">U-Web</a> Mobile 2.0 platform. It is
+targeted at MIDs and smartphones with OpenGL ES 2.0, such as Maemo 5 and the Omnia HD.
+The above screen view will show Maemo or Symbian status bars, etc, not the Windows Mobile
+ones.
</p><p>
See <a href="https://garage.maemo.org/projects/cilux/">the Cilux Maemo site</a> for Cilux development information.
</p><p>