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 </p>
 <h2>The Cilux U-Web Exchange</h2>
 <p>
-<a href="https://garage.maemo.org/projects/cilux/">Cilux</a> is a U-Web "Exchange": a
-peer for the <a href="http://the-u-web.org/">U-Web</a> Mobile 2.0 platform. It is
-targeted at mobile devices such as MIDs.
+Cilux is an application for smartphones, mobile devices and PCs that brings the
+<a href="http://the-u-web.org/">U-Web</a> to life...
 </p><p>
 <hr />
 </p>
 <h3>The U-Web</h3>
 <p>
-The <a href="http://the-u-web.org/">U-Web</a> is an interactive mashup ecosystem for
-people, media, times and places.
-</p><p>
-It's an ambitious project to create an open distributed platform for seamlessly and
-intuitively sharing, mashing and updating people and their right-here, right-now mobile
-stuff.
+The <a href="http://the-u-web.org/">U-Web</a> is an ambitious project to create an open
+distributed platform for seamlessly and intuitively sharing, integrating and updating
+people, identities and profiles and their right-here, right-now mobile stuff:
 </p><p>
 People in phonebooks and on Facebook. Stuff like photos off the mobile camera and photos
 on Flickr; personal messages, public Twitter updates; meetup times and map locations.
-Identities, videos, reviews, comments, news, statuses, calendars and current GPS are
-merged and tracked as they change.
+Identities, videos, reviews, comments, news, statuses, calendars and current map
+location.
+</p><p>
+Merged and tracked as they change, for all participants in the U-Web. The U-Web will
+magically shuffle and combine all this dynamic, interactive data around for you,
+according to the permissions you set.
 </p><p>
-The U-Web will magically shuffle and combine all this dynamic, interactive data around
-for you, according to the permissions you set.
+A U-Web mobile application will merge these on- and off-device people, media, times
+and places in a single, seamless interface - with one map and one calendar.
+</p><p>
+The U-Web is an interactive 'mashup ecosystem' for people, media, times and places.
 </p><p>
 <hr />
 </p>
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 </p>
 <h3>What Cilux may look like</h3>
 <p>
-Cilux will mash up these on- and off-device people, media, times and places in a single,
-seamless interface - with one map and one calendar.
-</p><p>
 Here's a mockup of what Cilux may look like. Of course, it will have Maemo, not Windows
 Mobile, status bars, etc.
 </p><p>
 <img src="http://the-u-web.org/wireframe03.png" />
 </p><p>
+<a href="https://garage.maemo.org/projects/cilux/">Cilux</a> is a U-Web "Exchange": a
+peer for the <a href="http://the-u-web.org/">U-Web</a> Mobile 2.0 platform. It is
+targeted at MIDs and smartphones with OpenGL ES 2.0, such as Maemo 5 and the Omnia HD.
 <hr />
 </p><p>
 See <a href="http://the-u-web.org/">the U-Web site</a> for more details about the U-Web.